Very good. I like the stand ins, makes it feel cute and charming. I know you said there will be violence and NSFW later, but for what is here right now, it's good!
Still, there are some text issues. "//" some of these.
Thank you! I'm glad you like the art style, I had a lot of fun trying to figure out how things should look. The game will be updated to have more story and art in the future, so I apologize for how short the visual novel is.
No worries! The art style won't take a drastic change, I actually planned on keeping it this simple and loose from the beginning! Thanks for the kind words!
I'm A Furry VN Enthusiast, always wanting to try New VNs out there and I seem to found one. The art style is what I dig the most. The sprites are cute & charming. Writing is okay for the beginning but the story is rather short. Can't wait for more though!
I found out about your VN from this FVN Community Discord Server. Thought I'd let you know as your VN got shared & that caught my attention
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Overall, there's a lot of helpful people and a nice atmosphere. I hope you will enjoy the server & wishing you luck for the future. Hope there's a next update for this!
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Very good. I like the stand ins, makes it feel cute and charming. I know you said there will be violence and NSFW later, but for what is here right now, it's good!
Still, there are some text issues. "//" some of these.
I really like the artstyle, its very charming abd cute... Cant wait for more of this! Lol
Points I can give to this are:
1- Great start! The writing gave me a somber mood, and the little effect of blurriness is really neat
2- Cute sprites! The notebook hand-drawn style gives it a nice identity.
I think this has potential! Just a little too short for a proper review
this is a really cute art style, and a pretty quick prologue
Thank you! I'm glad you like the art style, I had a lot of fun trying to figure out how things should look. The game will be updated to have more story and art in the future, so I apologize for how short the visual novel is.
i REALLY hope the art style is not a placeholder because this is unironically the cutest vn i've read in a while
No worries! The art style won't take a drastic change, I actually planned on keeping it this simple and loose from the beginning! Thanks for the kind words!
Hello!
I'm A Furry VN Enthusiast, always wanting to try New VNs out there and I seem to found one. The art style is what I dig the most. The sprites are cute & charming. Writing is okay for the beginning but the story is rather short. Can't wait for more though!
I found out about your VN from this FVN Community Discord Server. Thought I'd let you know as your VN got shared & that caught my attention
https://discord.gg/ED5ZKtCv65
If you're looking to promote/discuss/make more people aware/getting feedback, tips & networking on your VN or just hangout with other VN Creators, I recommend joining the community if you have discord.
Its a great place of resources for VN Developers. There are many of them which can help you become a better developer as am sure they are willing to share their experiences & gives you some tips. You can also search for specific people with talents like artist/musician/proofreader/editor/programmer etc.
Overall, there's a lot of helpful people and a nice atmosphere. I hope you will enjoy the server & wishing you luck for the future. Hope there's a next update for this!